Rough Beginnings is the 1st tale of United Earth. A young boy who loses his mother. A junkie father whose only emotion is numbness. Guided by some outside force. Stevie must learn his true inner power. Driven to follow his dream, Stevie must go beyond the norms of everyday society. How do you learn to do something that no one else has done? "You may have rough beginnings b Rough Beginnings is the 1st tale of United Earth. A young boy who loses his mother. A junkie father whose only emotion is numbness. Guided by some outside force. Stevie must learn his true inner power. Driven to follow his dream, Stevie must go beyond the norms of everyday society. How do you learn to do something that no one else has done? "You may have rough beginnings but you can always re-mold your life."
Rough Beginnings
Rough Beginnings is the 1st tale of United Earth. A young boy who loses his mother. A junkie father whose only emotion is numbness. Guided by some outside force. Stevie must learn his true inner power. Driven to follow his dream, Stevie must go beyond the norms of everyday society. How do you learn to do something that no one else has done? "You may have rough beginnings b Rough Beginnings is the 1st tale of United Earth. A young boy who loses his mother. A junkie father whose only emotion is numbness. Guided by some outside force. Stevie must learn his true inner power. Driven to follow his dream, Stevie must go beyond the norms of everyday society. How do you learn to do something that no one else has done? "You may have rough beginnings but you can always re-mold your life."
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Dan Buzenski –
I had a different and more outer spacey type cover on the Kindle book. Great story about consciousness.
W Keith –
Better than I expected The book was a good short read, like a good prequel I look forward to reading the next book especially enjoyed the ethnic diversity! Good job
Scott Tengzelius –
New age sci fi I really enjoyed this rather new age sci first novel the mind is much more capable than we allow it to be
Angela Randall –
Good book I enjoyed reading this book. I think that everybody else long try reading it to.Very well written.Good value to.Talks a lot about hard work
Jay –
EDIT: Since my original review (below in not italicized font) I have recieved the newly released edition which was edited by a new editor and it is incredibly easy and more enjoyable to read now! My original review gave barely 3 stars but the new edition is an easy 4 and I am excited to see where the series goes! I would reccomend this book to anyone looking for a unique sci-fi novel that covers racial issues! First and foremost this book was overflowing with errors. I can ignore most of the gr EDIT: Since my original review (below in not italicized font) I have recieved the newly released edition which was edited by a new editor and it is incredibly easy and more enjoyable to read now! My original review gave barely 3 stars but the new edition is an easy 4 and I am excited to see where the series goes! I would reccomend this book to anyone looking for a unique sci-fi novel that covers racial issues! First and foremost this book was overflowing with errors. I can ignore most of the grammatical errors as the book was in first person from the point of view of someone with questionable education based on writing, however there were a large amount of spelling errors. I am aware that this book was published through CreateSpace and not a big publisher with dozens of professional editors at the ready, but a lot of the spelling errors should not have even made it into a rough draft let alone through any sort of editing. With that aside Rough Beginnings had just that, a rough beginning, it felt as though only a couple minor things happened in the beginning and the last 50 or so pages held everything that actually progressed the plot while being interesting to the reader. I did have some interest in the plot once it started to pick up and I can see where the second book will most likely be set up much better. Things did go a little crazy in the last chapter as though the book should have been a bit longer to explain more, but again I have hope that the second book will iron out those wrinkles. One thing the author did very well on was the characters, while they had seemingly similar voices I would chalk that up to the book being first person with minimal amounts of long dialogue. All of the characters had a fair amount of backstory given and enough description to picture them all well. I may not be fully invested in the story or plot but I am interested in seeing what happens to the characters because they seemed more important to me! Overall I have to say I mostly just think this book needs another couple proofreads and it could be really good!
Lizzie Winns –
This book started off like a normal story of child neglect, but then morphed into some kind of out of body experience. With alien like abductions. Just weird, hard to explain... I most likely will not be reading book 2.
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